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Gregory Blair's avatar

My, God, Gary! This is masterful: honest without editorial, density without volume, thought-provoking without pretension; just simple storytelling of a world different from ours, and yet the same in its complex, aching humanity. Bravo.

Gary Mucklow's avatar

Thank you. The thing I was most afraid of was the tech swallowing the grief, about letting it become a story about archives rather than a father. You went straight to the humanity, which tells me it stayed where it needed to. Grateful for the read and the genreous comment.

Gregory Blair's avatar

That’s one of the things I loved about it. So much scifi gets tech-trenched; yours kept itself focused on what really mattered: how grief and memory are somehow both malleable and immutable; how each of those are both blessings and curses to our aching hearts.

Gary Mucklow's avatar

That paradox is the engine, and you've named it better than I managed to while writing it. The comfort and the theft are the same mechanism: you can't have the one without risking the other, and Isaac knows it, which is why he can't choose. Means a lot that it landed there for you.