The Shape You Make: Teaser #2
The Bus Stop

Four figures waited on the pavement beneath a sodium lamp that pulsed faintly as if struggling with its own breath. The painted queue lines had long worn away, yet the spacing held: each a measured distance from the next, each head bowed, each face hidden behind goggles.
The shelter at their backs was boarded with black composite sheets. Posters clung in layered tatters, softened by rain, their colours drained until only blurred shapes remained. Whatever had once been written there were no longer needed and had long since been surrendered to weather.
The road lay empty. Shopfronts stood boarded and painted, every window blinded into a flat surface that neither reflected nor invited.
The man nearest the timetable shifted his weight. His leather coat creaked as though weary of carrying him. At once the others stiffened. The woman beside him pulled her scarf higher, the fabric rasping over her chin. The older man drew his chest tight against the air as if to still it. The last in line, drawn into her hood, tucked her chin into her chest and stood locked in stillness.
Nothing followed. The silence swelled back around them.
Rain slipped from the shelter’s roof, drops breaking loose and striking the pavement, each one lost at once in the sheen of water spread across the ground. A car slid past at the far end of the street, its body sealed in black. Only its tail lamps glowed, two blurred red points swallowed by the damp air.
Time stretched thin. Boots darkened in the lamplight. The night pressed close, heavy with its own damp breath.
The bus arrived without ceremony.
It rose from the vapour as a block of black steel, its sides swallowing the light. There were no windows, no windscreen, only a faceless bulk. Whoever guided it remained shut away, unseen.
The brakes sighed. The doors folded open.
A low red glow leaked onto the pavement. Inside, a narrow aisle ran between booths set in rows, each hemmed with smoked panels that dulled the light. They were built close, shallow cells with seats moulded from plastic, the walls tight to the shoulders. Once entered they sealed with a soft slide, as if swallowing the occupant. The design carried the air of confessionals: narrow chambers meant for silence, partitions that turned each traveller inward and away.
The first woman moved quickly. Her steps were practised, careful. She entered the bus and vanished into one of the booths. The screen closed with a click that echoed down the street.
The man who had shifted earlier followed. He lingered at the step, his breath quick against the cold. His chin lifted a fraction before he stilled. The others waited. He went on at last, disappeared into a booth, and the partition closed around him.
The older man stayed at the curb.
The last in line shifted her hood by the smallest degree, as if waiting for him. He stood rooted. His fists opened and closed at his sides. His shoulders bent forward as though pressed on from behind.
The red light spread across his boots. The doors remained open longer than needed, then folded shut.
The bus withdrew, heavy on its suspension, the glow of its lamps shrinking into the fog.
The stop was returned to silence.
The man raised a hand to his goggles. His fingers trembled at the strap, hovered there, then fell. His breathing was shallow, quick, as though he had forgotten how to take air without faltering.
The younger woman turned away. Her steps quickened against the wet pavement, her face to the ground. She did not wait for the next bus.
He remained at the stop, solitary beneath the boarded shelter, his stillness heavier than presence.


I love the spooky set up of this teaser! It paints such a specific world and it blends well with all the other elements I’ve read so far.