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I and the Butterfly's avatar

I can only assume you will continue this story? We will keep you under observation in the meantime.

Gary Mucklow's avatar

These are snippets, scenes, lore to tease the bigger story I am writing for a novel (I think)

I and the Butterfly's avatar

Well I love it! Now I'm hooked. :)

Gary Mucklow's avatar

Yes! I got one.

Martin Grace's avatar

Really different format and interesting premise. Movie-like.

Lucy Vega's avatar

Oh I love the format of this one as well! And the plot is coming together so nicely in the different teasers and longer form stories. (I read them out of order sorry.) I think by far this is my favorite format you’ve used!

Gary Mucklow's avatar

I love that you have read them all. I very much appreciate it, regardless of order.

Wendy Russell's avatar

...and now I'm haunted...

Gary Mucklow's avatar

I would apologise

But I don't like to fib

Levi Edwards's avatar

I like when the text within a story is transformed to meet the world. To drop you into it. Super cool idea!

Judith Ashcraft's avatar

So *that's* what happened!