Thank you for the feedback. I can see what you mean, and meant no offence. It wasn't clear in the story, but I imagined Marcus as middle aged, and the new body much younger. It wasn't because of the race that he had superior physical attributes. I guess some parts got left out in the edit. But I can see now how it could look. Thanks for bringing it to my attention.
Wow! Unbelievable, yet still, it seems like a peek at what could be. I was transformed into a place, I hope we never see. Thank you.
Thank you.
I have to credit @Zerenner for firing those brain juices in the first place.
The usual wow- excellent- amazing- cone to mind, but this time all I can say is…. You are a brilliant writer.
This is incredible work Gary. The thematic depth is truly astounding. Your best yet that I’ve read.
Thank you.
Great read, unsettling in just the right ways.
Thank you.
Thank you, glad that I took the time to read
Thanks for reading.
Looks cool. I’ll check it out.
Thank you for the feedback. I can see what you mean, and meant no offence. It wasn't clear in the story, but I imagined Marcus as middle aged, and the new body much younger. It wasn't because of the race that he had superior physical attributes. I guess some parts got left out in the edit. But I can see now how it could look. Thanks for bringing it to my attention.
Of course, I appreciate the discussion.