Part One: The Souring
It's the quiet of the story the most unsettled me. The calm acceptance of whatever is visiting the farm is unnerving.
Dracul
Nope.
I love how dread comes through a collapse of ordinary causality. The sentences are solemn, almost processional. Wonderful, Gary.
Thank you Camila
Very nice building of suspense. I can't wait for part 2
Already posted yesterday. For some reason I am not allowed to link it here.
Ah yes, I realised immediately after posting 👍 I'll read parts 2 and 3 this evening so. I'm deep in the trenches of line editing my novel right now. Is part 3 the final part of the story?
I shorter part to finish
Thanks for the kind words
It's the quiet of the story the most unsettled me. The calm acceptance of whatever is visiting the farm is unnerving.
Dracul
Nope.
I love how dread comes through a collapse of ordinary causality. The sentences are solemn, almost processional. Wonderful, Gary.
Thank you Camila
Very nice building of suspense. I can't wait for part 2
Already posted yesterday. For some reason I am not allowed to link it here.
Ah yes, I realised immediately after posting 👍 I'll read parts 2 and 3 this evening so. I'm deep in the trenches of line editing my novel right now. Is part 3 the final part of the story?
I shorter part to finish
Thanks for the kind words