"I hate the threshold rule. I have opinions about it. This isn't the place." I'd read an entire novel narrated by this voice. The restraint at the end seals it. Strong piece.
Really nice. I wasnt sure where this was going, yet kept reading because the narrator's voice was so compelling. Was he a good guy? Was this going to be a Dexter situation? and i loved that a little old lady was knocking people off in her basement. Loved it.
Random idea brain is the best/worst. For me she kicks in when I am either half asleep, therefore unlikely to write it down, or when I am far from home with no paper and pen to hand.
"I hate the threshold rule. I have opinions about it. This isn't the place." I'd read an entire novel narrated by this voice. The restraint at the end seals it. Strong piece.
Thank you very much.
Nice! I like how we're given just enough information to keep us wanting to know what will happen next. Well done!
Thank you Sir!
Really nice. I wasnt sure where this was going, yet kept reading because the narrator's voice was so compelling. Was he a good guy? Was this going to be a Dexter situation? and i loved that a little old lady was knocking people off in her basement. Loved it.
Thank you.
Last week, as I was falling asleep, my brain shouted "Hey Gary! Burglars. But vampires"
F that guy.
Random idea brain is the best/worst. For me she kicks in when I am either half asleep, therefore unlikely to write it down, or when I am far from home with no paper and pen to hand.
Oh, this is a *good* one. I love the world you've created here, and I kinda want more.
Thank you. Weird where these ideas come from lol.
Ain't that the truth!
And now I want a strawberry shake... 😏
Haha
Oh, this was fun. Love the twist, reminded me of the film "Arsenic and Old Lace"--you can never trust those little old ladies.